Hide me… – Yippy Momma

Scrunched in a corner thinking, “where is he?” Darkness all around yet I felt I could not hide. Afraid to move. Afraid he would find me.

This was written for a Write On Edge writing:
Compose a text–160 characters–that would either elicit or express fear

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You hit the mark on how paralyzing fear can be. Nicely done! :>

YippyMomma

October 21, 2011 at 11:17 pm Reply

Thank you! It’s fictional, but inspired by non.

You so captured being frozen by fear- aak!

YippyMomma

October 22, 2011 at 1:24 pm Reply

Thank you! I combined the movies with a childhood memory.

Funny how darkness isn’t your ally when your hiding in fear.

YippyMomma

October 22, 2011 at 1:25 pm Reply

So true. I think it’s one the main reasons people are afraid of the dark…fear of what’s lurking in the darkness.

So this make me interested in the story. Pretty terrifiying when you think about it.

YippyMomma

October 24, 2011 at 10:27 pm Reply

I scary thought being hunted … I’m hoping I’ll never have to experience it first hand. Thanks for stopping by.

Is there anything creepier than the idea of somebody hunting….for you?

YippyMomma

October 24, 2011 at 10:26 pm Reply

I don’t know… I guess if an animal was hunting you it’s not as creepy b/c it’s not exactly pre-meditated is it? Thanks for dropping in.

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